Now Forgotten from Brenda Elena on Vimeo.
I can feel darkness! No literally i cant see anything!
The footage is a little dark and its hard to make things out. I think music would definitely help with the mood/emotion.
hard to see what was going on, but i get what you were going for
I enjoyed the birds-eye type of shots. They captured the lights below well.
Your first shots from the air were good establishing shots. I was left a little confused.
I liked when you showed the night scenery when on the plane.
I enjoyed how dark it was. It shows how nostalgia may not always be seen in the same light as it was perceived in.
A better shift between scenes may have improved it a little.
Good attempt on the video. It was too dark to really understand what was going on in the video.
Great short film. Music would have helped. I didn't really get the feeling of nostalgia.
the feeling of being on a plane would bring the nostalgic feel
I can see the nostalgia seeing and leaving the motherland. Good attempt but hard to see due to it being too dark!
Good job. You conveyed the weight of the scene well with the audio and darkness.
I can feel darkness! No literally i cant see anything!
ReplyDeleteThe footage is a little dark and its hard to make things out. I think music would definitely help with the mood/emotion.
ReplyDeletehard to see what was going on, but i get what you were going for
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the birds-eye type of shots. They captured the lights below well.
ReplyDeleteYour first shots from the air were good establishing shots. I was left a little confused.
ReplyDeleteI liked when you showed the night scenery when on the plane.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how dark it was. It shows how nostalgia may not always be seen in the same light as it was perceived in.
ReplyDeleteA better shift between scenes may have improved it a little.
ReplyDeleteGood attempt on the video. It was too dark to really understand what was going on in the video.
ReplyDeleteGreat short film. Music would have helped. I didn't really get the feeling of nostalgia.
ReplyDeletethe feeling of being on a plane would bring the nostalgic feel
ReplyDeleteI can see the nostalgia seeing and leaving the motherland. Good attempt but hard to see due to it being too dark!
ReplyDeleteGood job. You conveyed the weight of the scene well with the audio and darkness.
ReplyDelete